TO DO
= Clothe bikini girl on 'THINGS' page
= Change title and text spreads to have more inspirational supportive messages
= Move support pages to start of publication
= Change various pages to feel more relevant
eg. moving subheadings hierarchy
eg. experimentation on moving pages with blurry images
eg. click click page
CHANGES TO PAGES
- Less experimental, larger illustrations, more relevant to spread, easier to understand in terms of content, hierarchy in text implemented
= More inspirational quotes implemented in title pages and places which had less relevant text
= peer feedback noted importance of readers being able to read the text easily so hovering face has been removed from this as well
= clothed woman in this with extra quote
= in increasing the quality of the eyes on the moving out spread, I attempted the image trace however all options took out the drawing quality
= Then used the recommended adobe scanned app however there are some eyes which remain low quality in the PDF, which will have to be sorted in a different way
= After seeing the publication as a processed PDF, it allows you to notice things that need changing
PUBLICATION END TO BEGINNING
= WITH THIRD CHANGES IMPLEMENTED
WEDNESDAY
= Tutor Feedback 11:00 Wednesday
= Implement suggested changes
= Possible printing of flag if it can be delivered in time
= Design of card and printing/making of this + 3D Mock up of card (?)
THURSDAY
= Cambien Homes support worker feedback from girl in home
= Possible implementation of further changes
= Attempt of printing publication on home printer
= Design Boards
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